From 96a2858cc36cbc41f734fd45d440e6460c1e246b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: ashastral <git@ashastral.com>
Date: Sat, 19 Mar 2022 14:40:59 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] about tweaks

---
 web-optimle/www/src/About.tsx | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/web-optimle/www/src/About.tsx b/web-optimle/www/src/About.tsx
index 50fc3a7..91f5748 100644
--- a/web-optimle/www/src/About.tsx
+++ b/web-optimle/www/src/About.tsx
@@ -26,15 +26,15 @@ export function About() {
                 <i>(Hint: hard mode is turned off!)</i>
                 <br />
                 <br />
-                Like Wordle &amp; hello wordl, the game has two separate word lists: a
-                "secret list" containing only reasonably common words, and a larger list of
-                words you're allowed to guess. The game will let you know when you've typed
-                a word that doesn't appear in the secret list; you can still guess it if you
-                want, but it can't be the secret word, so try something else if you're on your
-                second guess!
+                Like <i>Wordle</i> &amp; other guessing games, the game has two separate word
+                lists: a "secret list" containing only reasonably common words, and a larger
+                list of words you're allowed to guess. The game will let you know when you've
+                typed a word that doesn't appear in the secret list; you can still guess it if
+                you want, but it can't be the secret word, so try something else if you're on
+                your second guess!
                 <br />
                 <br />
-                There's a new puzzle every day, starting at 6 AM in all timezones.
+                There's a new batch of puzzles every day, starting at 6 AM in all timezones.
                 Each puzzle tells you how many "paths to a win" there are, meaning how many
                 pairs of words you can guess to win (<i>not</i> how many words can be the
                 secret word). This figure only counts "common" words; you will never be
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ export function About() {
                 ]}
             />
             <p style={{ fontSize: "80%" }}>Not quite! The answer could've been <strong>WORTH</strong>.</p>
-            <p>Looks like we didn't cover all our bases. Let's see if we can account for that <b>W</b>:</p>
+            <p>Looks like we didn't cover all our bases. Let's see if we can use our first guess to account for that <b>W</b>:</p>
             <Row
                 rowState={RowState.LockedIn}
                 wordLength={5}